I finished my whodunnit I am so proud of my self I took a lot of pride in this! It is two pages long. In my story I get DNA from a hair I found and My sister and my friend get kidnaped by my teacher. anyway, in the end, I wake up and think it is a dream but when I look to my side my teacher is there and that is the end. So my story is not like some other stories that do all this juicy stuff and then it is just a dream boring! That is why I like my story because it is different! My story
I love how you have made your room realistic with the clothes on the floor too. Looks like your dog has the best spot to sleep!
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