Writing sample!

By Anonymous -

This week we did a writing sample and I think I did a good job and I think it is the best story I have done!

My story has got excitement and some girls get lost in a well where some trees are... After we did the writing sample on our devices Miss Mac printed them out we had to re-read it to see if it made sense I missed some words and made some mistakes. but I did edit it and make more sense and sounded better than it was before! The story is like there are three best friends called Haven, Lola, and Shirley. and they went over to Lola's house to have a sleepover and they went to Lola's creek but then they got lost and......

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